i like the 2 of Wally and Rippie's one is not bad too...
The only thing i would change on Wally's is the "Kaptain Krunch Krew", you should put it higher but between the bar or at least a little bit higher if you want to keep it at this position.
For Rippie's one, IMO you should move the bars a little bit closer to the K's. And a little bit lower to, to keep a part of the bars above and under the letters.
Dont know if what i say its really clear :S