i didn't think i was able to produce that in three days ^^ i started with the starting countdonw as a test for timing animations...and i was pretty happy with that and then i thought that going on a classical school presentation wouldn't fit with that start ^^ so i had to do a clip ^^
u right image since 1.20 are not centered, i saw it and left it like that ^^ no real intention behind that. Just "would it be cool if its not centered...why not lets leave it and see if someone notice..."...Also the text before that - "cet été (this summer)" - are a lil bit too fast but when i saw it i already rendered two times the video and if i tried to correct it for like 0.20 sec of visibility i would have to retime every following slides and animations to fit on the music ^^ so i totally assume my laziness on this one ^^ would have been a paid job, i would have sacrificed a lil bit more of my already depleted sleep reserve to make it fall right on timing...I got the idea and how it works thats all that matters ^^
at 2.00...no they're not meant to be read...even for french speakers ^^ they can read the titles thats all ^^...If i would produce a real commercial i would skip that part and shorten the video to max 1m for a Looooong clip or max15 sec (and 15 sec is already an expensive commercial)...skipping almost all the visuals showing the inside. And make it international by using english text instead of french.
Here we had to present our paper to a "jury". There was only one guy working in a graphic design studio but he's a beats in graphic design ^^ other was our teacher, the director, the pedagocical counselor and the social counselor...not what i call a "real" jury ^^ So they had the paper in their hands and theorically it was not necessary to show a lot of the inside pages as the presentation would last max 7min....we had to focuses on presenting our intentions and some technical aspect, and why we put red or blue in that square...i over showed the inside in the video to gain time and skip that technical part of presentation...you can see that every article has a color, for a professional no need to explain more why you choose to make subtitle in the same color, or why you choose this or that color, he already got it ^^ So like that if the guy was interested by a page, He just had to find the color he liked and check it in detail
Classmated showed like 4-5 pages max...focusing on time. I didn't care about the time ^^ i already had 2.30 free of speach ^^ just had to explain fonts, a lil bit of paging choice and the Iphone 17 ads...was large on time.
At the end the guy said that my magazine looked pretty profesionnal, with summary, editorial, legal mention, subscription page, old issue's page,etc... others except for one, who had a Movie magazine like direction, are "formation magazines", graphically cool, with cool pics, neat graphic design, but not "complete" as i tried to do mine. I was a little in conflict with our teacher and center direction cause i did 3 ads, a 4 pages article on my paintings work instead of an "editorial" about presenting me like in fourth grade, and added the subscription pages. Cause of that "i wasn't following the briefing", I didn't care, i knew i wasn't out of the brief as i followed it ^^ i just added eight pages cause i had time to make it and found that it looked more like a real magazine like that, plus making ads is a part of graphic designer works no?...felt that i was in the good direction so i stood on my "i want to do something pro" position and squeezed my butts til the end. ^^
I was so glad that it was almost all what the guy pointed as "very good and what he liked" in my work ^^ i loved the six feet long grumpy faces of the teacher and the director at that precise moment ^^
Now i'm going to be a probationner in a graphic studio or a printing house for a month for a salary of 2$/hour for training, then released in the wild world of work ^^ 25 mails send in two days...4 negative responses...21 following phone calls made...19 on message box -_- ...hopefully i have two positive answers and meeting by monday...hope they bite the bait
but just something constructive criticism