My first review :/

[Garycheese]

I have filmed a cheese review on youtube and i was hoping that you guys would watch it and give me some feedback about it like how i can improve it.

I know it was made in movie maker which i should not use and that i sound nervous but once i get the hang of it and talking to a camera i should sound a bit better.

 

[Take]

Don't hold you camera by hand just make sure it's somewhere stable, also put the music down a little I can't hear you very well. Besides that I think it's awesome, hahahaha keep it up! you should aslo film eating it hahahaha

 

[Garycheese]

Thanks i will see if i have a tripod or some sort of holder for it. and yeah i was thinking the music was a bit loud but ill turn it down in the next video.

 

[miniCyb3r]

Weird. I can hear you just fine. I like it.

 

[BuckRogers]

@Garycheese: Brill Gaz!,

I had a Tesco triple cheese sarnie, followed by a mahussive bag of Mini Cheddars for lunch today and I thought of you! lol

 

[Jana]

The Dubstep in the background makes it sound kinda badass

Nice vid, Gary

 

[Infinity17]

very cheese

 

[Storky]

i like it. good music and intro etc. maybe you could speak a lil louder though as ya voice is quite deep

 

[Garycheese]

Yeah I'll try in the next video

 

[SteelHorse]

What Take said! Besides that now I want some cheese!!!